Looking yet running

[Xiao]

<<<<<OCC Brook is a guy.>>>>>>
I ran fast, and close to the ground, my golden coat reflecting the light. I knew I was far away form my lands. I knew that if found some manens would try and kill me showing no mercy, but I had ran from my lands because no one was there. I had searched for days, and found no one, no bones no blood or fur. I had giving up on finding anyone. I was strong one could tell just by looking at me, I was small, muscular, and lean. As I ran I never winced once if a thorn went on my paw, my paws were so hard the thorns could not go in.

I was so mad, I thought I would brust, finally I would get back at those evil awful manens! The only thing I had saw that was alive was my mother, that I wanted to remember, I was so upset about my past I never thought about it. I was going to finally see a manen and get even!

[Oasis]

( i'm using my feline friend, if thats okay with you :] )

Apple-green opticles scanned the area. She inhaled the crisp October air, and advanced through the bush. She halted abruptly, scenting the air. A small scent of canine lingered on the air, but it was fresh. She snorted, and continued to walk, but inhaled the air every few seconds. She gasped in horror. Honiahaka!? she said. She was going to be kitting soon, and was scared for her life. What if it is in a pack!? What if they take down me and eat my un-born kits?!

What if--- a large honihaka was visible 50 meters or so away. She opened her eyes wide in terror and ran as fast as she could.[/color]

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I gasped as the canine advanced towards me. A blue and red feather hang from its ear. As much as I coulden't, due to me pregnant and the fact I haven't eaten for two days limited me to running. I ran as fast as I could, ignoring the "what ifs" that pulsed through my mind. I ran and ran until I was deep in an unknown forest. Prey was everywhere; I wasen't used to being pregnant and hunting. Usually my tribe hunted for me.. I ignored my hunger, and pounced roughly onto the rabbit infront of me. It nearly got away, but to my surprise, I caught it. I enjoyed my meal up in a tree, across from me was another pine with thrushes on it. I licked my lips, but ate the rabbit. Its stringy meat felt funny on my tongue, but it was better then nothing. I watched the honiahaka advance towards me-- I guess it saw me. I ate as fast as I could, despite me wanting to eat and enjoy it. I scrambled up as fast as I could, dropping the rabbit carcass onto the muddy, dirty forest floor.

[Xiao]

<<<<<<OCC fine with me if you use a kitten and Brook has a odd accent just waring you. Sorry this is kind of short.>>>>>>
I ran after her my feather flapping in the wind. I knew I could out run her for I could see unborn kits in her tummy. I ran fast looking at her. I then leaped up in the air, and landed in front of her.

"What is your name?" I asked with my French like accent. I then pawed the soft ground in front of me. "Are you hungry?" I then looked at her, and thought Why is kitty in forest? I then asked my question "Why is kitty close to giving birth in forest?" I then smelled the air, and my nose nearly exploded with all the prey smell in the air.

"No be scared me nice." I said hoping she would understand. I was for the first time in my life happy, and talking.

[Oasis]

Blazepelt coughed and gave him a puzzled expression. She looked at her swollen stomach and remembered the kits. She hissed, pinning her ears on her head. The air was cold and brisk, making her orange pelt puff out and act as insulation. She once more hissed then spat and jumped off the tree, running away from the honiahaka. "Nightstorm!" she called out. A very large brindled black cat jumped off from the tree, grabbing his small mate by her scruff. He ran with her dangling from his jaws, and placed her safely tucked in a hollow tree. Her eyes opened wide from fright, but quickly closed from sheer exhaustion. She lay down wearily, but still glimpsed out of the bush often, and sniffed the air waiting for the scent of the honiahaka to arrive. Nightstorm puffed out his fur, and sheathed his claws. He stalked into the bushes, waiting for the unfortunate honiahaka to come.

[Yami]

I Fop, the leader at this time, was patrolling the land when I came across a scent I hadn't smelled in a long time. Manen! Of course I was manen but it just isn't the same smelling you and only you week after week.
I ran faster faster through the forest. I knew every path and trail, every tree and bush, and I knew I was not alone in this forest. I slowly crept up on the other manen. Just to find out he was not the only one, there was a cat! I watched the scene waiting for the right time to approach. I had not a single wolf in my pack, such a lonely pack. I remembered my childhood my siblings being more successful always looking at me and whispering " I feel bad for her, such a poor pup". Look at me now! I thought I was successful I was the leader!

[Oasis]

<< sorry if i'm godmodding lol. just tell me and i'll change it. >>


Nightstorm crouched, looking at the red manen cross the bush. He wriggled his nose at the disgusting scent, and ran at top speed. He ran, jumped, and landed onto Fop's neck. He hissed, spitting and tearing at her flank. He jumped off, and then lunged at her feet, securely grabbing onto her feet, tearing and clawing at them. He crawled up her leg like a spider, tearing fur off of her wings and body. Fur was everywhere, same with . Blazepelt watched in horror as her mate fought viciously with the canine. She hissed, and called Nightstorm back. She hustled him into the bush, trying to stay calm.

[Yami]

{{Sorry if I'm godmoding}}

I, Fop stood stock still. True I was loosing some of my fur, but if that stupid fuzzball thought a bit of scratching was going to make me back down he was wrong! I snarled and shook him, and turned my head to watch as he went flying into a tree with a thump! As he lay there I stood over him snarling Stop! I called over the other wolf. What are you two doing on my territory I through a glare over at the cat, waiting for a response.

[Oasis]

<< yeah, thats godmodding. i'll let it slip though because you said "sorry". and he was in a bush, he detatched before the end of the post :x >>

[Xiao]

<<<<<OCC sorry I was gone for so long! I was out in the country with no Internet.>>>>>
I saw the whole fight unfolding in front of me. I hated seeing blood, blood, blood. All of a sudden I was back in my village, it was a clear autumn day, the air was crisp, and the leaves looked beautiful. I was strolling down to my home, when I smelled something burning, at first I thought it was a fish. I licked my lips as I though how tasty a fish would be, I also wanted to see my mate Stream.

As I came nearing to the village the awful smell got worse, then I saw the palace was on fire! I leaped to the village tears drying from my eyes, as I saw the palace with the friends I loved the most burning down to the ground. I heard all the screaming as the fire took its victims. I ran to the sleeping dens ignoring the pain in my paws, and eyes. I saw Stream, and Cave, I ran toward them hurriedly. As I watched Cave ran into the dens, I went in after him. I then saw River trapped under rocks. Cave manged to save her, and we all got out, but I saw many bodies of the unfortunate. We all got slip up.

Then I came back from my flash back, and went up to the cat, and said"I am sorry I will no hurt her." I then bowed to him showing him I had respect for him.

[Yami]

{{ Should I change my post? *ehem* Fop's a girl}}


I, Fop looked at the other wolf. And who may you be? I eyed his feather, no manen around here had one, he clearly wasn't from here. I nodded toward the feather That is an interesting thing you have there I said with a tint of sarcasm where did you get it?

{{Sorry for short post}}

[Xiao]

"I am honiahaka." I say growling with my pearly, white, teeth showing. I always hated manens, I hated them so much. I then go slowly toward her, my paws crunching on the leaves. I then tensed my muscles, my fur was sticking up making me appear huge. I walk over to the cat standing on his side, fighting with him. I then say "Stupid manen, always hurting other." I then say to the cat "I help kill manen."

I then ran at her, leaping in the air, hoping to sink my teeth in to her flesh. I roar a frightful battle roar, hoping that she would not notice the cat stalking toward her.

[Yami]

I, Fop scented both creatures coming upon me. think, think think Now both animals were upon me about to spring. Oh come on think! Then suddenly an idea came to me. Fly!! I jumped up and flapped my wings. Up, up, and up I flew. Why do you want to kill me? I landed on a strong branch, high from reach none of them could have reached me. What have I done to you? What makes you hate me? I could give you a home, yet you reject me as if I were the end of the world. Why? I cocked my head. Easily I could understand the cats hate. Cats and Wolfs had never really been what you call friends. But the other dog, wolf or not, was related to me in a way. Why was everything so ......confusing.........

[Xiao]

<<<<<OCC Read the article here Yami www.scribesofmanen.proboards45.com/index.cgi?board=rules&action=display&thread=68 and Brook has another reason for hating manens. I just thought you were confused. Tell me if you are not, because it seemed you were confused from your posts.Read from the top of the page to the end of history.>>>>>>

[Leporidae]

((Sorry for butting in, but I don't think that Yami is confused. Just because the player knows something, doesn't mean the character will. Brook is probably the first Honiahaka Fop seen, so she probably doesn't know much about them.

Also, why is Brook happy to see a manen when he a few posts later gets angry at one just because it's a manen and attacks is?))

[Xiao]

( OCC ok sorry about the confusion, I was positive I put he was getting even (reads post over) oh snap! It said he wanted to see one! Thanks for telling me Lep, I will fix it right away.)