Post by Oasis on Aug 8, 2008 5:35:36 GMT
[=ooc=] you won't understand the title's meaning till like..the middle of the story. inspiration comes from when i was getting my hair layered. it looks cute now<3 anyway.
list of songs you should listen to while reading this story, makes it more dramatic <3. listen to them in any order you want. this is not in any particular order.
society - eddie vedder
a new day has come - celine dion
sea of love - cat power
in my place - cold play
rainy day - ayumi hamasaki (jap singer)
edge of the ocean - ivy (greys anatomy soundtrack)
add anymore if you wish. only makes it good if they are pumping music at pumping parts of the story, and dramatic sad-ish music if its dramatic and sad or something.
PART 1
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He tried to run after his swift mother. She had dropped him in the middle of the field. "Mom! Wait!" he cried out in sorrow. He ran as fast as he could go. His mother looked behind her, tears of guilt ran down her cheeks. She turned her head sharply, and ran as though something horrible was chasing her. He tripped over a rock, and fell into a little ditch. He dragged his wet and now dirty coat towards the end of the ditch, and watched the dim silhouette of his mother disappear over the hills. The sharp rocks that hid in the ditch scraped his legs and body, leaving little cuts and scrapes. He cried out loud "Help.. anybody! somebody! hel-sob-help me!" the tears created a ball in his throat. He choked back the tears.
[= ooc =] im gonna write a second story for you guys >:3
The littled femme looked through the thick bush and saw the poor cub struggling with the twigs, mud, and leaves tangled in his fur. She was a playful pup, curious about everything. She sprinted in a dash to her mother. 'MOMMOM!THERESACUBANDHESALLTANGLEDANDSTUFFANDNEEDSHELP!"
the hyper cub told her parents so fast they didint get one word.
"Misty, what happened? And talk slowly." her mother scolded."There's a little cub all tangled up in the field near the ditch and he is realllyyyy skinny and has all these twigs and stuff all in his fur and hes calling for help!" "Moko, stay here with the puppies." the femme said. She then departed from the den and trotted to the helpless nearby pup. His gigantic eyes were fixed on a tasty looking doe, on the other side of the field. His eye sight was more then sharp and keener then keen. He looked at the deer and growled. He looked at his black claws and then looked at the deer. Before the vixen could reach the puppy, he had darted after the deer. He ran very fast and barked. Before he reached the doe he crouched low, prowling like a cat. He roared and tried to tackle the doe. She heard him and darted. "Darnit." he said. The vixen was panting when she reached the puppy. He looked at her curiously and said uneasily "Who.. are you?!" "Well first I would like to ask, who are you?" "Umm.. well.. my name is..."
LOL I SUCK AT WRITING<3
yayme<3
TO BE CONTINUED....
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LOL SUCH A BAD CLIFFHANGER<3
list of songs you should listen to while reading this story, makes it more dramatic <3. listen to them in any order you want. this is not in any particular order.
society - eddie vedder
a new day has come - celine dion
sea of love - cat power
in my place - cold play
rainy day - ayumi hamasaki (jap singer)
edge of the ocean - ivy (greys anatomy soundtrack)
add anymore if you wish. only makes it good if they are pumping music at pumping parts of the story, and dramatic sad-ish music if its dramatic and sad or something.
PART 1
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
He tried to run after his swift mother. She had dropped him in the middle of the field. "Mom! Wait!" he cried out in sorrow. He ran as fast as he could go. His mother looked behind her, tears of guilt ran down her cheeks. She turned her head sharply, and ran as though something horrible was chasing her. He tripped over a rock, and fell into a little ditch. He dragged his wet and now dirty coat towards the end of the ditch, and watched the dim silhouette of his mother disappear over the hills. The sharp rocks that hid in the ditch scraped his legs and body, leaving little cuts and scrapes. He cried out loud "Help.. anybody! somebody! hel-sob-help me!" the tears created a ball in his throat. He choked back the tears.
[= ooc =] im gonna write a second story for you guys >:3
The littled femme looked through the thick bush and saw the poor cub struggling with the twigs, mud, and leaves tangled in his fur. She was a playful pup, curious about everything. She sprinted in a dash to her mother. 'MOMMOM!THERESACUBANDHESALLTANGLEDANDSTUFFANDNEEDSHELP!"
the hyper cub told her parents so fast they didint get one word.
"Misty, what happened? And talk slowly." her mother scolded."There's a little cub all tangled up in the field near the ditch and he is realllyyyy skinny and has all these twigs and stuff all in his fur and hes calling for help!" "Moko, stay here with the puppies." the femme said. She then departed from the den and trotted to the helpless nearby pup. His gigantic eyes were fixed on a tasty looking doe, on the other side of the field. His eye sight was more then sharp and keener then keen. He looked at the deer and growled. He looked at his black claws and then looked at the deer. Before the vixen could reach the puppy, he had darted after the deer. He ran very fast and barked. Before he reached the doe he crouched low, prowling like a cat. He roared and tried to tackle the doe. She heard him and darted. "Darnit." he said. The vixen was panting when she reached the puppy. He looked at her curiously and said uneasily "Who.. are you?!" "Well first I would like to ask, who are you?" "Umm.. well.. my name is..."
LOL I SUCK AT WRITING<3
yayme<3
TO BE CONTINUED....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~`
LOL SUCH A BAD CLIFFHANGER<3
