Moonlight Sonata

[Oasis]

The stars danced in a dazzling array of constellations and such.
Galaxy lay on her back, staring at the gorgeous night. Her four ears twitched but she remained calm. Her wings spread out under her, forming some-what a bed. Her foggy crystal eyes wandered deep into space, searching. She breathed for a long time, only about 40 breaths per minute. She closed her eyes and rolled onto her side, inhaling the sweet, crisp air. It clung inside her nose, and the sounds that only the night kept rang through her four ears.

Ah, yes. Life was good.

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Don't mean to be rude or anything, but that green glow w/ the green text is a little harsh on the eyes.

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[Oasis]

lol then i'll change it.

it is i guess but hey at least im trying to be different.

[T]

<<ooc: Still going to use Flay, but with a different personality. And yes, still 1st person.>>

I raggedly dragged myself through the air, barely moving my wings. As I felt my energy drain away, from the wound in my side, I shifted into a glide- it was all I could do.

Suddenly, the pain in my side snapped (I hope you understand what I mean by this). I cried out as my wings crumpled and I began to tumble down. I flopped down onto the grassy hill, which had fortunately been quite close. I managed to register a surprised manen before the world dissolved into merciful blackness.

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<< eh.. k. i'll try 1 person rp with my 4 eared puppy. shes an anubite X manen cross her bro was black, but had hare feet (long flat feet going forward).. also this was meant to only be a one person post but to hell with it. >>

I immedietly snapped out of my trance and got up. An unconcious manen with a huge gash in her side was on the brink of death (I think..).

I grabbed her neck and tossed her on my back, hopefully not injuring her anymore then she already was. I gently trotted over to a nearby fox burrow, barking at the mother to leave. She hesitated a moment, but who woulden't listen to a winged, brown, four eared monstrosity like me? I started to drift off to thought again but quickly snapped out of it, shaking her off my shoulders down my neck and head, onto the soft rabbit-skinned ground. I quickly ran to the only patch of herbs that I was aware of and gathered some, returning to the cave. I immediatley pressed the raw herb into her wound. I then ran off and grabbed some broad leaves, pressing them into her wound and for my last and final trip outside of our new "home". I ran to the old willow tree. It was dying anyway, but fortunatley had exactly what I needed. I quickly flew up to the top of the tree, grabbing the longest "ropes" of leaves I saw. I then tied them together and flew back to the den. I wrapped the "rope" around her body and tied it. The rope had worked just the way I wanted it too-- a makeshift "bandage" type rope. It held the herbs and leaves in place. I smiled and ran off, getting some food. I returned to my new friend -- placing the meat in a safe place for tomarrows digestion. I hoped she wouldent think of me as some alien and reject me--- like so many others...

[Yami]

{{occ: If you think I'm annoying just tell me and I'll delete the posts or calm Yin down}}

Yin walked into the clearing howling Mom, mom! Mom where are you!
Are you my mom? he asked the winged manen Hi Mom! -he not very bright- Then he walked to the manen laying on the ground Will you play! Com on we can play pass the pine cone! Wake up! Wake up! WHY......ARE......YOU......SLEEPING! When Yin got board with that he got up and chased his tail.

[T]

Hraka. Ebleem hraka. How'd I get into this?* I murmured as I was startled awake. I noticed a bouncy pup running around and saw the manen I had seen before (just before blacking out), and was surprised to notice the poultice she had put on. In my old world, everyone was for themselves.

I began to say Thank y-, the words feeling strange on my tongue, just before I felt a horrible twinge in my side. The world swirled back into blackness and my head thudded back on the floor. I had only two things on my mind then- how I had never had occasion to say thanks before, and that I thought I was hallucinating. How else would I see a manen with four ears?

The next time I awoke, I smelled meat. I was about to try to lift myself up and crawl when I noticed the manen- yep, four ears- I thought beginning to say something.



<<ooc: No time for more. Sorry. Also, give me a fair rating- what would you rate my rp on a scale of ten?>>
*Hraka. Ebleem hraka. means literally "Excrement. Stinking excrement." in Flay's home language. It's similar to a curse, about the same rank of cursing as if you said "D*mn this f*ck".

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I lifted my head, gently twitching my ears. I knew it.. I softly murmured.
She already thinks of me as some freak.. oh well.. it only helps..

I began to softly sing a lullaby my "mother", a stellars jay, would sing to me.

" I never want to see you unhappy .. I thought you'd want the same for me..
goodbye my almost lover, goodbye my hopeless dream... "

I grabbed some meat from the back of the den. The small bouncy baby manen had already curled up in the fur and fallen asleep. The stars twinkled gently in the sky, the moon, a crescent. I gave the meat to the femme. It was not fresh, but it was good enough. She seemed young, vibrant. I smiled gently at her warm face, she seemed to be smiling at me. I gave a long sigh, and shuffled over to her body. I snuggled up to her soft fur, she was a beast like me, we were mixed.

She was half domestic, I was half mystic. We fit together perfectly like the last two missing puzzle peices . I smiled, and looked at the two around me. I stretched out my paw and brought the puppy closer to my fur, snuggling him in it.

For once in my life, I felt loved.[/b]

<< ooc : ehh... 9 1/2 ? can you rate mine ? <3 kthxbye<3 >>

[T]

<<ooc: Modified my above post to clarify some points. Yours? 9. But I'm a harsh rater, would probably rate my own 6.>>

I was surprised when the manen who had helped me snuggled up to me. Then again, the customs in this region seemed different, by the way she had helped me. I relaxed my muzzle into a smile. Maybe, even probably, the customs in this region were different. And then maybe, even probably, the moon was made out of mouse hraka. I sighed and yawned. I fought to keep myself awake, but it was hard, I was exhausted and my side still throbbed, atleast a little.
I stayed with my head upright in conciousness for as long as I could, then groggily prodded the other manen. You take the next watch. Wait, I never heard your name. What is it? I barely heard her reply before falling asleep - yet again. In my dreams, I cursed my weakness.

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(ooc: sorry for not replying earlier. to lazy to post and i couldent think.)

I smiled at her.

She haden't eaten anything for a while now, which was probably the cause of her fainting multiple times. Probably hates stale meat I thought, laughing a little. I ran out and caught a some weasel. There were a lot to come to think of it --- so I caught some more. They all looked like they were running from something--- but what?! A huge crocotta stepped from the bushes. I dropped the weasel, my maw open. He licked his chops and looked at me. D-d-d-d-d-ont touch me! I studdered. He smiled and walked towards me. His shiny silver pelt beamed from the sun. How much weasel can one beast eat to make his coat that shiny? Uhm.. are you um... gonna.. um.. eat that? Cause um.. i'm really slow.. and um.. those weasels and stuff like that... um .. is fast... too fast.. his stomach grumbled. So basically.. you want the weasel-- not me? Uh.. uh... well uh.. shelter would be nice.. oh oh AND food. Yup yup. Need food to survive... I think.. I smiled at him. He put his ears on his head, arching his neck so he could look at my chin and cheekbone. He smiled and laughed, exposing pearly white fangs that were on every little spot in is mouth. I quietly led him to our den, and moved some fur around for him. He smiled and lay down on the soft fur. Thick ribs were exposed behind his pelt -- so I quickly grabbed some of the dried meat from the back. I dropped the rabbit meat and some of the weasel in front of him. He ate it , even the bones. I smiled at his big, blunt, body, and walked over quietly to the mixed femme. I dropped the fresh weasel infront of her, cutting it open to release the nice scent. Hopefully that would wake her up.

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I woke up to the scent of freshly-killed weasel. Galaxy looked at me with something like a happy expression on her face. I dug in.
Thanks, Galaxy-rah.* I said after licking my lips. You are the leader of this territory, right? I asked, but just to be sure. She probably had been kind to me because I had looked like a strong enough manen, except for my side, so she wanted me to join. Of course she might have been kind enough to just help, maybe. And maybe snake venom made you grow an extra head.

<<ooc:*Lord/Lordess Galaxy>>

[Yami]

Yin opened his eyes he was in a dark forest

To his great joy he saw his mother standing in front of him.

Mom!

Yin ran to his mother, but she ran away

Mom! Come back! Wait up!

He ran faster, she ran faster. But she was too fast.

All of a sudden Yin fell down, down in a pile of leafs with a loud thump!

His mother was standing in front of him

Mom!

Yin ran to greet her, tried to lick her but his tongue touched nothing but air.

Her picture fading Yin's mother uttered one last word

Good-bye

Mommy no! Don't go! Mommyyyy!

Thats when Yin blinked open his eyes to the real world. He had been dreaming, yet it seemed so real..