Oasis
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Post by Oasis on Oct 7, 2008 1:55:43 GMT
<< same basics as erin hunters books, and I give all the credit to her. RiverClan, ShadowClan, WindClan, and StarClan are all used in her books, so again, all credit to her. And it said on WikiAwnsers that in North America, rat babies are called pups, in Europe, they are called kittens. oh and the ____ means kits/pups because depending where you live, rat babies are called either kittens or pups. >>
Rats.
Clans of rats.
Many clans, fighting to stay alive.
Leafbare; Greenleaf; Newleaf;
Food.
Food grows.
Food dies.
Because of food, animals either grow and eat,
Or the other.
They don't grow, or eat, and they pay the price.
They die.
Even if they don't want too.
Sometimes they kill the o l d e s t elders, to eat their meat.
Sometimes, even killing eachother.
Yes, these rats can be carnivorous too.
They kill cats sometimes, raiding on them, biting and nibbling the cats 'till they can't feel them moving anymore.
But sometimes, the cats have their ways.
Cats, you think, would always win.
They are big, fast, strong, [shadow=red,left,300]agile.[/shadow]
Thats not always the case.
Rats are not big, they are small.
They can still win.
More rats get killed by cats, though.
And everytime they kill a cat, or raid the cats, successful or failed, they know that some of their own kin will replace the cat, or the [glow=black,2,300]raid[/glow].
The names of these loyal clans are for [shadow=red,left,300]cats[/shadow]
MoonClan, FireClan, YewClan, EarthClan, RiverClan, MistClan
And the names of the large[shadow=purple,left,300]rat[/shadow] clans are
SunClan, ShadowClan, WindClan, SnowClan, ThornClan, StarClan, RockClan
Your time has come.
You entered this world, with no fur, blind, deaf, defenseless.
Your mother comforts you, whether you be feline, or rat.
You suckle at her belly, drinking the soft warm milk from her belly, produced by the food your clan has been bringing.
They respect and follow the warrior code, and hope someday, you will too.
You squeal, snuggled in with your brothers and sisters, as you all fight for a spot of your mothers nipples.
She protects you, wrapping her tail and body, or with grass and leaves, to keep you sheltered from harsh Mother Nature.
STORYLINE/PLOT
The ground shakes, you squeal and meow. Your mother looks around with heavy, large, frightened eyes. Mother Nature is showing her bad side.
The cave starts to rumble, and your mother hears and see's a crack. All of the queens grab their _____ and rush out, warriors helping gather the un-steady and weak queens that have recently _____.
Your mother rushes out, holding as many as her ____ in her mouth as she can, draping the others across her back. But she forgot you! She runs back inside but the warrior gaurding the entrance won't let her. Your mother explains the situation but the gaurd shakes his head, once again rejecting. One of the warriors grunts and runs inside, overhearing the queens situation. He runs into the cave, and see's you in the corner. The brave warrior runs as fast as he can, dropping you outside, as he runs in to grab another queens ____ .
The cave cracks again, with the warrior inside. He inhales deeply, running out as fast as he can-- but sadly, not fast enough. He throws the ____ from his mouth as he trips and stumbles, the cave collapsing on top of him. Your mother and the other queen burst into sobbing tears, as she nudges you gently, ignoring the other clan members crying and staring. ______ yells "For the life of a ___?! _____ is now dead because of that ___! Curse that ___ and its life!" your mother scowls at the angry and shocked member, and your mother nudges you again. You squeal, as you finally are able to muster your strength and you and your siblings open your eyes, unfortunatley to the horrible scene.
Now your an apprentice, a strong warrior and hunter/gatherer in training. Your mentor is proud, for she/he has trained you well, with the high and good skill passed down from previous mentor to apprentice, and now to you.
Your clan gathers at the HighStone, and your leader announces that you must have a silent vigil for one night.
You sigh, but are unable to keep a smile contained. You beam as the other warriors and members smile, and nod.
Your clan leader announces "S/he shall now be named _______ " and you nod at your new name, but look at the harsh, cold, snow below your paws.
LOGO + MINI BANNAR COMING SOON!!
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Xiao
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Post by Xiao on Oct 7, 2008 19:01:29 GMT
Wow awesome Mac! Great story line!
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neonwoof
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Post by neonwoof on Oct 7, 2008 19:16:42 GMT
This sounds...amazing! Really creative idea.
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Leporidae
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Post by Leporidae on Oct 7, 2008 22:55:01 GMT
Yay rats! While your at it, let's make some snail warriors! WE ARE ARMORED WARRIORS, AND WE SHALL FIGHT TO THE DEATH! . . . what?
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Oasis
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Post by Oasis on Oct 9, 2008 2:03:44 GMT
*plays triumphant music in the background* *snails going as fast as they can, cats standing there, laughing and rolling on ground* *snails go right over the cats* Alpha Snail : OH SHYT! Snail Deputy : OOPS. DAMMIT. WE MISSED THEM > *snails turn around and go as fast as they can, but when they turn around, cats are gone* Alpha Snail :PORKCHOP SANDWITCHES! Deputy Snail : Sir, Sand cannot be witches. *witch raises up from the sand* *snails yell and run as fast as they can* *witch drops on ground, rolling and laughing* *snails go and try to fight her, but accidently get rolled on* *witch rolls in snail guts and explodes* Leader Cat : Ohsnap. *all the clan cats roll on ground laughing* *cat piss everywhere*
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Leporidae
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Post by Leporidae on Oct 9, 2008 2:21:41 GMT
Man, you remind me of someone I know. Do you happen to be also known online as Nikazi? It's ok though, snails are hermaphrodites, AND they lay a ton of eggs after they mate. By a ton, I mean that that I'm 100% certain that ALL species of snails lay at least 200+ eggs. That would make about 400+ eggs from ONE MATING. ONE. So more snails will take the place of all the dead snail tribes and start brand new *snails move around on the ground, slowly to triumphant music. They find the spot where their forefathers died in a huge battle* LoopyStar: Men, on this very ground, is where our fathers and their fathers died on the feild of battle. Today, we're here to honor their sacrifices. SlimeFoot (Well, snails don't have paws. Only makes sense): Who killed them? LoopyStar: *sigh* SlimeFoot: What's wrong, Loopy? LoopyStar: StupidStar and his brave men declared a war on all cats. The cats didn't take our threat seriously, and continued about on their business. When they arrived, a witch rose from the ground and crushed them all to death between her fat rolls. SlimeFoot: . . . LoopyStar: And the witch rolled around in their flesh until the obese woman collapsed onto herself and exploded into a fire of blood. The vile cats laughed and laughed as they drowned in our combines blood and their shat. SlimeFoot: . . . LoopyStar: And that's why, my son, we don't have legs.
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Oasis
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Post by Oasis on Oct 9, 2008 2:34:39 GMT
OMG LOL IM PISSING MYSELF.
And no. But i'll change my name to Nizaki if it makes you feel better :3
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T
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Post by T on Oct 9, 2008 2:44:05 GMT
And no. But i'll change my name to Nizaki if it makes you feel better :3 Oh no! Yet another name change from the infamous Mac! (I'm only calling you Mac, and that's my final decision!)
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Leporidae
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Post by Leporidae on Oct 9, 2008 3:38:18 GMT
And no. But i'll change my name to Nizaki if it makes you feel better :3 No thanks D: That'd just be confusing, you know?
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Oasis
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Post by Oasis on Oct 9, 2008 4:07:01 GMT
Lep, I think we should make a play together.
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T
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Post by T on Oct 9, 2008 22:18:32 GMT
About snails, please. And send me a copy when you're done!
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Oasis
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Post by Oasis on Oct 10, 2008 0:53:43 GMT
Shoor
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Post by [Kamikaze] on Jan 16, 2009 22:20:10 GMT
-glances up at her rats fighting in their cage- lol.. i'll take a look at it! Sounds excellent!
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